Here is the almost finish version. Something doesn't feel quite right but I just can't say what at this point... Please comment, it would really help me out
Glad to see you're still working on stuff! Keep at it! As far as critique goes, it's been a little while since I animated anything but these are some of the things I noticed:
- check your general movements, some of them are still floaty, others pop a little too quickly. Watch that you're not putting in any unnatural gestures. - eye darts should be quick, don't let the pupils slowly slide across the eyeball - tone down your key light a little, the hot-spots on the Moom character are a bit bright.
Don't forget to act out your movements naturally and film them for reference, or maybe get a friend or relative to act it out for you. You'll notice a lot of little things when you watch it over and over, and it'll really help.
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Hey Josh!
Glad to see you're still working on stuff! Keep at it!
As far as critique goes, it's been a little while since I animated anything but these are some of the things I noticed:
- check your general movements, some of them are still floaty, others pop a little too quickly. Watch that you're not putting in any unnatural gestures.
- eye darts should be quick, don't let the pupils slowly slide across the eyeball
- tone down your key light a little, the hot-spots on the Moom character are a bit bright.
Don't forget to act out your movements naturally and film them for reference, or maybe get a friend or relative to act it out for you. You'll notice a lot of little things when you watch it over and over, and it'll really help.
Good luck and keep going!
Thanx for the awesome advice Sam!
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